It's very good you're being creative, but it honestly also sounds like it took you no longer than five minutes, it doesn't make a whole lot of sense. Vietnam is a mere 1000 miles away from Taiwan, a different country. Daring not to make a peep implies your sheep are noisy all the time. I chalk it up to a language barrier, but the common saying goes "No Pain, No Gain" while yours conveys the opposite.

@Metazolid yh but I'm 13 and I was bored so I was just saying random stuff

@Wozinho We all start somewhere :) Keep it up